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Need help realizing a story

Sun Sep 28, 2008, 7:08 PM
  • Mood: Stumped
  • Listening to: Leonard Cohen
  • Reading: a big book about insects
  • Watching: Alien
  • Eating: Teryaki Chicken
  • Drinking: Wormwood
It's this idea I came up with while cleaning my shelves today.
Basically, a guy has been married for a few years and finds that his skin is gradually becoming bluer and bluer.
His wife does all the cooking, and she often makes delicious stews for him that she barely touches herself, citing fullness. She also bakes cookies and brownies that he constantly takes in to work, and brews his coffee in the morning, although she always sticks to tea.

It turns out she's been dumping massive amounts of colloidal silver into everything she feeds him. Colloidal silver, in large enough quantities, does turn people's skin blue.

The problem is, I need a motivation. I was thinking she would do it just out of some form of sociopathic curiosity, and maybe has a history of conducting long-lasting "experiments" on other life-forms, such as siblings and pets.
I need ideas for some of these "experiments", feedback on the solidity of the basic plotline, maybe even a stronger motivation (although the experiment thing is why I would gradually turn a loved one a different colour, if I ever did).

Of course, the title is going to be a horrible pun, "How John Dinsmore Got The Blues". The wife's name is Matilda.
She breeds rare parrots for a living and is a kleptomaniac, so the massive quantities of colloidal silver either stolen or payed for by the birds.

Thanks in advance. Anybody who gives me an idea I'll use gets...um...recognition, good karma, and five internets.

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:iconthundercake:
I've often wondered if you could slowly pluck out someone's eyelashes, one by one, every night until they were gone.

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:iconlordogreus:
There was an episode of House sort of like that, except it was gold, and it didn't change his skin color.

Maybe the color blue could have some significance, something he did involving that color that humiliated her years ago.

Maybe she was in a port-a-potty, and he tipped it over while she was in it.

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:iconmngamojemo:
:thoughtful: They would have to be a deep sleeper, or just not have very sensitive eyelashes.

Matilda's sister Joyce. Now she always wears dramatic, false lashes, because she thinks her own are just so naturally sparse.

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:iconlordogreus:
Only one way to find out.

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:iconcittenscollar:
Maybe a sexual fantasy?

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:iconmngamojemo:
It did strike me as the sort of thing that would be on House. It's hard to imagine most other doctors pinpointing the source of his ailment.

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:iconlordogreus:
Yep. It's been a while since I watched it, though. I've got seasons 1-3 on DVD.

So, no help there? I don't know if this is supposed to be serious, funny, dramatic ...

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:iconmngamojemo:
That could be a good one. I'm sure there's such a kink out there.

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:iconaldarune:
I don't have any ideas about your story yet but it reminded of this [link] and this [link] [link] The last two are about the same person and I reckon you got inspired by his story. I may be wrong though.

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